外里写,但最终还是没有这么做,在番外改用了其他手段(要命的是跟24/7又有一点重)。宁可重了24/7也不写窒息就是觉得它不安全,我不希望宣扬不安全的性行为。所以调教手段如果被觉得跟24/7类似,我也真没办法了,毕竟现在这样的成品有很多原因。
Karlyn跟Elaine类似?可能吧,可Karlyn真的戏份不多统共就几句话。那暴君又跟谁类似呢?Murray?不会吧。把Karlyn那点台词全塞给暴君也不是不可以的,但这样故事里的角色们性别太不平衡,总共就老太太和女秘书是女的(秘书的戏份很少),连小宋都疑似双,实在太世界大同,我不喜欢。我还曾经想过给Karlyn弄个女奴,后来想想各种不好,还是作罢。
所以,配角也好调教也罢,真的不是有意借鉴24/7,只有契约是特意引用的。十多万字都写了不差那几百字,何苦还非要弄个跟主角不是很配的契约硬塞进去,害我改前改后。累不累。
顺便放上原文:
Slave Contract.
1. The slave agrees to obey and submit completely to his Master in all ways. There are no boundaries of place, time, or situation in which the slave may willfully refuse to obey the directive of his Master.
2. The slave also agrees that, once entered into the Slavery Contract, his body belongs to his Master, to be used as seen fit.
3. All of the slave's possessions likewise belong to his Master, including all assets, finances, and material goods, to do with as He sees fit.
4. The slave agrees to please his Master to the best of his ability, in that he now exists solely for the pleasure of his Master.
5. The slave understands that all that he has, and all that he does, shall now move from right to privilege, granted only as He wishes, and only to the extent that He finds useful.
I have read and fully understand this Slavery Contract in its entirety. I agree to give everything I own to my Master, and further accept His claim of ownership over my physical body, heart, soul, and mind. I understand that I will b